[b]Tenish[/b]
The character is excellent. Well done. Just a few nitpick things:

1. Could you put each section header in bold? For example, [b]Name[/b]. It makes it easier to distinguish things.

2. Limit Break section, second sentence: “In this timeless” is followed by a full stop rather than a comma.

3. While your Spirit section did not follow the character sheet, it is interesting enough for an exception to be made. Just make sure to execute this idea of yours in a thoughtful and well-crafted manner in the story. I am positive that it will not be a problem for you.

I am going to create a character depository thread. Once it is available and I give you the green light, you should post the character sheet there—make sure to correct the things that I commented on beforehand.

[b]Adora[/b]
I understand the character concept, and I am not saying that you should change it, but the language is a bit heavy. See if you can replace some words with lightweight ones, or censor the F word in some clever fashion.

“DEMONS” would be better replaced with “ALIENS,” as the creatures originated from a celestial body that crashed onto the planet. 

Think about what kind of forms or concepts that Fredrick’s spirits had before they came to him. This is something that everyone should keep in mind.

Besides these minor things, the character is on the right track.

[b]Insatiable[/b]
Personality and such are good, but I have to comment on the time stuff. It is just one of those things that people react to due to the inherit power. “Timekeeper” should be “Accelerate” or “Decelerate”—you cannot have both in the same spirit. “Wither” should be exclusive to either enemies or allies, not available to both. “Rewind” must be limited to your character only.