I'm afraid I'm going to have to decline your character, Lilies. From what I can see your writing is a bit... Choppy, I guess? And not the most descriptive. I do apologize, and wish you luck elsewhere on RPG. Side note, as I pointed out in the rules, I try not to be a jackass and can be persuaded. Send me a writing sample over PMs, something simple, and we'll see from there. Until then, it's a no.