Alrighty, feedback time again. So, chukklehed, the basic ideas look fine... but could use more detail. She'd say it would benifit from some lengthening and fleshing out, the background in particular. You also missed the age section. 

And thats fair enough Lionheart, but the tv world does play a pretty big part in it as she sees it. Namely look at persona 4 arena, the p3 characters can summon a persona without need of their evokers while in the tv world too and they didn't have a shadow to accept ever. So at the end of the day she thinks the cards are just an element of the tv world. 

Heh, though these kind of debates around the intricacies are part of the reason she'd think just using evoker like things is the better bet. They for a fact are known to work in the real world. Also just like to keep players having the same general set of capabilities, not having just one character have something unique no one else does.