[quote=Hank]
Since we're all offering our characters up for roasting, is anyone willing to give my submitted character sheet (Aran Nykerius) a good scrubbing?
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I don't have much time right now to say much, but I will say that personally (and note that my opinion is fairly worthless compared to Derv's) I really really dig Aran's "theme." It's really refreshing to have someone that's not combat oriented, and I think it would really flesh out our team. His backstory is also very good, if a bit short. There's a lot of room for expansion in there: not strictly necessary, but might be neat to read and develop the character.