Sovi3t, while we enjoy helping, you cannot simply ask us to improve your history in such a general manor. As Derv said, I am running other games and cannot do everything for everyone. My suggestion is that you go and do some research (aka go for a wikiwalk on the Mass Effect Wiki), as well as look over your sheet carefully for inconsistencies and edit accordingly.

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I am still quite happy to answer questions of a more specific nature though, as time permits me to!

For those asking for sheet reviews, I'm afraid I'll not be doing anything too in depth for anyone as reading sheets and replying with feedback can take quite a while, and I still have my own sheet to finish (Salarian Hitman). That said, I'll try and at least do a brief review as I'm gonig to end up reading them all at some point anyway. Might as well be now.