I lowered my guy's age for the pilgrimage thang just to make it longer and seem... more legit/credible.

I'm pretty much done with my character, I just need to comb through everything to find any grammatical errors and to see if everything fits together correctly. I also need to finish the appearance, but I'm being too lazy right now. I much prefer to rest and read through something than do it immediately.

Hopefully, it's up to snuff.