There we go!

Tried my hardest. Hope it's up to snuff. I have ways and back ups if the whole exile thing isn't particularly catching or if it doesn't work out well. The ending may be a tad rushed, as it was around 5 a.m. when I finished, but I attempted to make a few edits to hopefully make it run better.

I wouldn't at all mind someone telling me if the history doesn't work well or if it's not thought out enough so that I can fix it before the deadline. :o

EDIT: Ugh, I forgot to edit out the timeline notes for myself. @_@ Whatever. I'll get to that later. I need to run some errands.