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Thank you for the criticism.Wow, I missed a lot. I'll need some time to look over it and edit her sheet just in case.I'm surprised you didn't comment on how it took only ten years for her to become famous like Zaeed, but oh well.I hope you guys have fun. Kinda bummed I didn't get in, but I guess I just wasn't as good as everyone else's.
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It was honestly a split hair, so you weren't all that far off. :) I have you in the reserve, so when (it happens in just about every game) somebody drops, I'll send you a message to get you into the thick of things. Don't lose hope!

Anyways, I'm going to try to have a first post ready within the next couple days. Everybody work on the things I pointed out and get ready to rumble, or something.