[quote=Elendra] That was a marvellous read, Jorick the Anti-Foxes. Although the post-ending made me feel like I was reading the spam version of the final pages of the Return of the King. It makes sense for you to have to do it, but still :p [/quote] Haha, thanks. Also wait, I've now been compared to both George R.R. Martin AND Tolkien, even if in not very solid or entirely positive ways? Nerd ego boner achieved. [quote=Sherlock Holmes] An excellent story from beginning to end, Jorick. Well done! [/quote] Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. RIP Lady of Burdens. :gray [quote=Doivid] LOL I loved the epilogue, I was looking for any little details and easter eggs I could. Really good story, poignant conclusions and definitely satisfying. [/quote] Yeah, had to give little bits and pieces to hint at the future. I'm pleased that you found it to be a satisfying ending. It ain't perfect, but I tried to wrap everything up to leave nothing hanging. [quote=Zed] Good job, Yorick. [/quote] thx bby <3 [quote=Halo] It's been an epic read, Jorick, and it's kept me up far too late far too many a time. I'm honestly sad to see it come to a close, but the ending was spectacular and touching enough to soften the blow. [/quote] Haha, thank you, and you're welcome for the late nights. I'm kind of sad to be done with it as well, but it is what it is. Wouldn't want to draw it out for ages with needless extra bullshit. Also I killed off basically all the names characters so that wouldn't have been feasible anyway. :lol [quote=Alex] This chapter was one of the least deadly! [/quote] Muscle guy was indeed Kangaroo. And yup, only chapter 2 had less deaths. There's no need for the finale to be the bloodiest of all. :sun