Just one major problem with your character sheet, Enalais, and that's the history.

This is the beginning of the second war with the Dominion. The Dominion and the Empire were at a stalemate since the White-Gold Concordat, which has effectively been broken right now for the first time, so your history doesn't fit. Also, as I said to Serinaty, work on your grammar and punctuation please. Fix the profile up and I shall review again.

I'd also suggest lowering some of those master skills, as for his age that's stretching. Don't be afraid to give him a few flaws.