Irish, while I know your application is accepted, I am not a GM, and this will sound harsh, but I'll be completely honest and blunt.

In my opinion, you need to put more effort in your application. This is not Free RP, this is Casual, where acceptable grammar is preferred and where we like to put in a little bit of depth. I don't mind you using the cliches, because we all do that sometimes, and I am slightly OK with the shortness of it, but please, at least fix the spelling and grammar.

Peace.