[quote=Work_U_Dumb] [/quote] Going to have to say no outright unless major changes are made. Personal history is far too short, as is the National History. Your God's Divine aspects don't jive very well together. As stated before, they should be a reflection of your god's achievements or history, not necessarily ability. I'm also going to be a lot more strict with things like "God of the Sun" or "God of Death" because those have huge potential to be broken. Also, your Nation has far too many common high-fantasy races that others would probably want as their main race, such as orcs or Dragon-kin, as well as two different types of elf. Try creating your own races instead, perhaps. Overall, fewer races, or more original races, Develop your God and Nation a LOT more, and lower the general power levels of your God and the creatures in your nation. Being able to lift 3000 pounds and punch through a wall of diamond is way overboard for a mortal. EDIT: Also, I edited in a short list of universal Godly powers that we will all have. It's the last hyphen in the general info hider.