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Is my too big?
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Maybe, yeah. Keep in mind this area isn't as small as it looks (it's about the size of Europe). You could probably cut back on that and still have a decently-sized nation. But I want to reserve any real judgement until after you have finished your application. If your app proves to me you can handle a larger territory, and it justifies a larger area, then I might make an exception.