Blaz: I like that much better just in general. The only suggestion I'd have left is: MAKE IT MORE AWESOME. You're allowed to be a bit over the top in this RP, so I'd suggest making it... more... somehow. Give it a gun or some other abilityas well as changing it's form (maybe not dust though, we already have a a lot of that by now). Also is the semblance basically like an illusion or something? Because I'm not sure how effective it would be if that's the case. I feel like it would momentarily stun something like a grim, and then it would just ignore it and move on as if nothing had changed. Against a person it might be fine, but otherwise... ehhhhh...

I really do like your character, but he's just falling a tad too short at the moment. Since I think everyone who showed up has given a CS at this point, I'll give you one last chance to tweak it before I make up my mind tomorrow. If you impress me, maybe you'll get in, if not, I think I know who's being accepted at this point.

Maki: Umm, well... I hate to do this, but I simply have too many issue with your CS. The weapon, the history, and the lack of spacing between paragraphs that's making my eyes bleed a little... It think it would be best to just give you an early rejection from the RP, as we already have too many applicants. Sorry. :(

Pyro: OK, but you can't have all 3.

-Everyone Else-

So yeah, if you didn't read what I just said to Blaz, I'm about ready to call this to a close and move on to actually getting the RP going. If you wanna make any last tweaks to your characters, do so soon (Like, before lunch tomorrow maybe.).