Pyro: I'm sorry to be a knit picker on this issue, but can you explain why he needs Coolant? You said that when running as fast as your character, they're liable to burn up and turn into a fireball. Can you explain how that is logically possible? The only connection I can get is how a meteor would start burning up as it falls to earth, but that's more because of the atmosphere that it travels through than the force of wind around it or the speed it's traveling at. While his Semblance could have practical use in very hot areas, I don't see it how it is helpful other than in the way that you described and, frankly, I don't see how that scenario is possible.

Maki: I think I can get why Killa is put off by your CS. First of all, spacing. I would space after every single section. otherwise, it's too clustered. As for the information, I think you should have a name for your character. You've given no reason as to why she is simply ???. The weapon is a little odd which I think put him off as well. Personally, I don't see a problem with it. Truthfully, I thought of something similar for a separate character. Finally, a few things that brought up issues in the history, but I think it is mostly the lack of detail and why she's going to Beacon. Basically anyone who goes to Beacon wants to become a hunter. It's unlikely that she would stumble across the opportunity by chance and, even if she did, it's equally unlikely she would be accepted there. Not trying to be mean about it, but I think those might've gotten his attention. I personally think your character is unique and has a lot of potential. Just a little bit was off about it before we would actually accept it.