BUT for the name, you guys said you'd prefer that we hold off on names?? I explained in my post why I put question marks because you guys wanted to make up a cool team name first, yeah? :/ I did say naming wasn't an issue. I'm kind of confused now.

I apologize for the format, I directly copied it off of MS Word. I'll take note of the formatting discrepancy next time, thank you.

And I understand your point about the history part, thank you for telling me. It's actually a good point since I didn't want to really reveal too much, but I understand your concerns. Thank you.

You don't sound mean, btw. Your criticism and your answer to my concern is very helpful to someone who hasn't stepped into an RP forum for a while. However, if you could give me a chance to strengthen my character more, I'd be more than happy to make it less cringe-worthy. :P