Alright, let's see if I can stay in order here:

@ Deanmachin - The CS itself is fine, I suppose, but as we've discussed, when it comes to actual posting, try to follow everyone's lead. The dialog is all put together, it needs to be separated everytime someone speaks. You may refer to others' posts and take it easy, if you need help you need only ask.

@ Kal-El - Looks good. 

@ Teleport - I suggest you hurry, then.

@ RyuHill - I sincerely hope you missed my post, I'd hate to assume you just don't read them. As I said, certain people have contacted me beforehand for their incoming characters, and only they would be accepted. Kal-El is one of them.

@ Altered - I'm gonna punch you in the face D:<

@ skarsgard - The Sample Post was for me to see your writing ability, it does not need to be used for your first post, though it would hasten the introduction, so to speak. As for how it should end, you will hopefully see after I put up the first post in the IC.

Also I apologize once more, I thought I put the IC up last night, but in my sleepiness, I refreshed the page instead of submitting the post and thought that would put it up. Silly me. I'll retype it and put it up again, that's what I get for not saving the post.