I'll take a look.

I do have several problems with the CS. 
1: you power to make things near you age 100x faster makes you nearly untouchable.
2: due to your characters skin falling off and leaving only bone (assuming by your picture and description) you would be dead. You body physically wouldn't be able to handle trauma like that. The pain alone would cause you to go into shock and die.

I know this is an rp about heroes so it does have fiction to it but it is through genetic modification. If your genes modified to have your flesh fall off then that is a extremely painful death.

Those are my primary concerns.