Alright, Diminuendo, thanks for the heads up.[quote=Jangel13]
(just thought id try)Name: Angelo OrtegaGender: malebirthday: January 13Appearance: (except darker skin and no wings)District: Karanese District Personality: Angelo is a hard worker but he is usually a very nice person to others whenever possible. He can be sort of a clown sometimes trying make up lame jokes on the spot to try and ease peoples tension choosing to use his persuasion to get people to get along instead of fighting with others, if possible Angelo tries to stay out of conflict all together since he isn't a violent person to people.Bio: son a carpenter from wall maria. Angelo didn't grow up with many friends except his pet dog that followed him around mainly because he always kept food out for him and Angelo named him shadow though Angelo didn't have many friends and his mother died when she gave birth to him, because he was always busy building new houses with his father and gather wood they would need which made him stronger then most average people. Angelo was born to be strong his father always told him as he did work that kids his age wouldn't be able to do, although Angelo was a strong person he was also shy and hated to fight unless absolutely necessary but the thing that Angelo always wanted to do was go outside the wall and help build a grand utopia for everyone. Angelo always looked around seeing the garrison regiment being lazy and talking about how it was easy to be them and Angelo even saw some scout regiment soldiers coming home bloody and near death but Angelo couldn't help but feel proud of them because they had the courage to do what nobody else would even think of doing, Angelo started to think that he should put his strength to use and help people someday and what better way then to be a scout and expand their world beyond the walls and build a place where it could be a thriving city. so Angelo went into wall rose and he wanted to join them, Angelo probably guess they would call him a fighter but Angelo was simply a person with a dream of a new tomorrow. relationships: Father that was a carpenter, and a dog that always followed Angelo around so Angelo named him shadowproficiency: intelligent in finding ways to win the battle, can help repair 3d gear on site if necessary with his toolsinefficiencies: short tempered if someone hits the right button with him, 3d gear he isn't very fast on it and that makes it harder to get around titans other: wears a gold Angel necklace that his mother had, it is very special to him and friendly or not if someone messes with his necklace he will beat them down...
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Sorry but your character is a bit of a Marry sue, and your bio was quite hard to understand and make anything of it. 
You should probably just go through your bio again, and rewrite it so it's easier to follow and read. Also, try to make your character more unique.