@Jangel13. I'm glad to see that you took my advice and made your characters back story better, but that wasn't the only problem with your character. You did fix the biggest problem with your character. yes, but, making a CS isn't [u]only[/u] about your character. It's also a way for me (The GM) to see your skill in writing. I've already come to the conclusion that you lack originality in your character (This was made evident but the second time I asked you to adjust him), lack the writing skill to use proper grammar, and fail to be creative with your characters (I've noticed this was the second time you've used this character in an AoT Rp, and it was the second time you got declined. I would have have taken the hint already.)

I know I don't have to be like this, but I'm not accepting your character. sorry.