nobody but you bothered to tell me what was wrong they just said mary sue and assumed I understood what they meant. I know I have problems with the grammar but I would like to point out that its only like that during the occ because im really just trying to put everything down beforehand. thanks to your help though this cs will be able to be approved by someone else. its not that im unoriginal I just want to make sure that since Aot is made as a dark anime I don't want to steal someone on the animes problems so I tried to go with upbeat. ill ask someone to help me make the cs you made better for someone else. thanks again