Aaron, while i sure ain't the most exeperienced artits around, i still spotted a few anatomical errors in your drawing of a Satyr. While i may not be right, due to my aformentioned lack of skill, even from such a perspective, looks too wide. Escpecialy considering that she is a woman. And second, which i am completely sure about, is the stomach. It has no mass whatsoever to it. Even if the abdomen is flexed, to support the body, it wont be flat in such a position, a bump being created by the intestines pulled down by gravity to the lower part of the abdomen. Making it more round should make it look more natural.

But again, i may be mistaken, so you checking that yourself by finding some refrence would be better than just listening to me.