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And, for you Sola, I have a few possibly annoying comments-I don't know about the rest of us, but I find it more difficult to read a huge block of text than I do separate blocks of text. In the future, I would appreciate it if you could press enter every now and then when narrating. ;P
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I will take that into consideration next time.

[quote=icicle]
When you said that the Red Dwarf Inn looks "as if abandoned" I became really confused, especially after the next two sentences. I know what it means now, but you get the picture
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I don't see a question here...
If you know what it means by the end of the paragraph I think that it is fine...

[quote=icicle]
Are all the guards left-handed? You noted that their swords are on their right, but I'm not sure that's what you meant...
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Yes, all the guards are left handed.
I hadn't even thought about that, but just for you and your questioning ways, yes they are all left handed. 
HAPPY NOW !