[quote=VKAllen] My character is done btw. [/quote] Look over my post on the last page. I talked about your character. [quote=SomeoneSomewere] Just going in number order to make sure I get everything. As a bases, this is like( exactly like) the city of bones and what not. Can't remember the series name.1. In the series I'm talking about, nephillim are generally the children of two nephillim. They do have angel blood in them, just passed down from generation to generation. ( I'm adjusting the history slightly) all the way from the first nephillim. They are like guardians of the humans, protecting them from demons, warlocks, etc. 2. This one I'm using a link. I'm going to tone down its abilities slightly so it's not so over powered. Since I forgot to name the blade, it's name is going to be Nuriel.3. Which supernatural abilities are you talking about? Just to clarify. Is it the immunities he has? [/quote] Since I don't really know anything about the series I'll need to trust you. 1) So they're kind of just people with inhuman blood? That's fine... but if their job is like to hunt demons and stuff... And Yokai are generally demons of some sort... Isn't it like against their whole being to attend a school for demons, monsters, etc.? 2) I'll allow it. But give a little more detail if there are any powers the blade possesses and how you plan to tone them down. 3) I meant i'm fine with the runes being used to amplify his physical abilities. However, if he can apply more runes that will give him extra supernatural powers I'd like to know what other powers and how effective they'd be and how long they'd last. How long do runes last altogether? 4) I'm fine with the immunities because you said "most" which means he's not like completely impervious. And generally since we're in a school for monsters and the like we're more likely to come in contact with non-human diseases. 5) Isn't the sight kind of useless? I'm sure in the series you're using it's pretty awesome, but here it's just kind of... meh... Like even if you can see past disguises it won't mean much as there is such a thing as demons and the like who are good. You'd still need to find out whether the demon is good or bad before attacking it or something. Sorry if I seem like I'm being a jerk or overly critical or something TT__TT I just feel I should be to better understand the character and abilities and I tread more cautiously with series and things I know nothing about.