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Character name - Jason Gonzales Nickname - JayPosition - First officerSpecies - humanGender - maleAge - 26Appearance - Height - 6,3Weight - 194Apparel - on missions he wears standard issue sealed armor issued to navy marines and out of a mission he wears alight Kevlar vest with metal plates covering his chest and abs.Weapons - side arm and SMG,grenade and a combat knife.Equipment - Radio,Skills - officers training, field first aid, cyber chipWeaknesses - inexperienced, and since he is an officer he didn't receive as much combat training as the regular grunts.Powers - telekinesis force fields levitationLikes - reading,music,moviesDislikes - combat,explosions, people unable to control their emotionsFears - clowns,the vacuum of space Personality - calm and collected and tries to see the bright side of thingsBiography - Born on earth Jason grew up on earth in san Francisco. at the age of 17 he had his mother sign him up for the military. After his time in the academy he was assigned to the The S.S. Durendal due to his ties with his uncle in high command.


It needs more information. It looks rushed.

Like, what are the extent of his powers? What type are his weapons? Bullets, energy?

Also flesh out his personality a little more and his backstory. Like what was his childhood was like, how well he did at the academy and why he joined? Why did his uncle push for him to go on such a dangerous assignment knowing well that he might not make it back?
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updated some. Sorry kind of busy.
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Well just finish it when you can
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updated some more, look it over inform me what needs to be changed now so I may change it through out the day.
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updated some more, look it over inform me what needs to be changed now so I may change it through out the day.


The only thing that really bugs me is the grammar, but if you're gonna write better in the IC then I'm fine with the way the CS is.
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yes I am. Using a smart phone with cracked screen the moment so it is lacking some.
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yes I am. Using a smart phone with cracked screen the moment so it is lacking some.


Yeah I use mine sometimes too. It can be messy.

So your character is accepted.

Will have an IC up once Lone finishes his character
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Alright. Also if i need to use my phone to respond quickly its going to be messy, but as soon as I can i will fix it.
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So I'll have the IC up by tomorrow if things go according to plan.
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Great sounds good.
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Character name - Krystina Markov
Nickname - Krys, callsign “Wolf Zero”
Position - Fighter pilot/Starfighter squad leader
Species - Human
Gender - Female
Age - 29

Appearance -


Her left hand is cybernetic, assisting reaction times by fractions of a second. Fractions may be small, but they’re appreciated when they start to mean life or death.

Height - 5’4
Weight - 115 lbs

Apparel - Her flight suit is what’s shown in her appearance picture, though the orange is replaced with a sky blue color.

Out of combat, she wears a white tank top and brown cargo pants, with black boots. And, like every cocky ace pilot, Krystina has a pair of steel aviators. If it’s cold, she’ll throw on a black leather biker jacket.

Weapons - Krystina carries a small machine pistol for personal defense, in case things get hairy, and man is she proud of it.



The Medium Ranged Automatic Machine Pistol, known colloquially as the Miramap, is a fully automatic machine pistol carrying twenty rounds per magazine. Effective up to medium ranged engagements, the Miramap is a trusty sidearm that has pulled Krystina out of countless combat situations.

Krystina also wields a standard-issue combat knife. For when things need to get a little old school.

Equipment - Subdermal communications implant, capable of being tuned via Krystina’s pad on her wrist, the pad on her wrist which serves as a sort of small computer, and an emergency beacon. Just in case.

Skills - Considered one of the most talented fighter pilots of her generation, anyone that has seen Krystina fly likens it to watching an Olympic figure skater. Her talent in the cockpit is unmatched. She also maintains peak physical condition. Trained in hand-to-hand combat, Krystina is both lethal in a fighter and in close quarters.

Weaknesses - She lacks firearms training beyond basic training, and often lets her cockiness get the best of her. Overconfidence is often her downfall, sometimes forcing others to keep her in check just so she stays alive.

Powers - nah

Likes - Flying, physical fitness, people that know what they’re doing, and an ice cold beer with a pack of cigarettes when she has a moment to relax.

Dislikes - Laziness, people that don’t know what they’re doing, and people with a moral compass that does not align with hers. She’s stubborn that way.

Fears - Drowning and facing ultimatums. The only two things that are guaranteed to break her resolve.

Personality - Incredibly confident in every way, Krystina can come off as brash and abrasive at first. However, the longer one gets accustomed to her cockiness, the friendlier and more lighthearted it seems. She cares intensely for her colleagues and more so for her friends, though it’s hard to tell behind how much she seems to care about only herself.

Biography - Born during the Moscow winter, Krystina’s father believed from the very start that she would be made of steel. He was soon proven correct, as Krystina solidified herself as the toughest kid in the neighborhood by age 13. She regularly got into fights with other kids, and she almost always won. She was sent to boarding school in an effort to reel in her misbehavior, but she only continued to be a firecracker until she turned 18.

Through all her fights and misconduct, Krystina dreamed of space. She always wanted to fly, and took every chance she could to watch the ships enter and exit the local spaceport. Nothing pleased her more than the sounds of the engines firing up and the rapid displacement of air as starships shot away.

So, she joined the E.S.C. military. Trained to be a fighter pilot and was best in her class. She got her first starfighter at 24, and was stationed on the S.S. Cairo as the leader of the ship’s fighter squad. She saw most of her action fighting pirates and squashing small rebellions, and her reputation quickly grew as one of the best fighter pilots around. When the Durendal was put into service, Krystina was assigned as the ace fighter pilot and leader of the fighter squadron of the ship.
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Character name - Krystina MarkovNickname - Krys, callsign “Wolf Zero”Position - Fighter pilot/Starfighter squad leaderSpecies - HumanGender - FemaleAge - 29Appearance - Her left hand is cybernetic, assisting reaction times by fractions of a second. Fractions may be small, but they’re appreciated when they start to mean life or death.Height - 5’4Weight - 115 lbsApparel - Her flight suit is what’s shown in her appearance picture, though the orange is replaced with a sky blue color.Out of combat, she wears a white tank top and brown cargo pants, with black boots. And, like every cocky ace pilot, Krystina has a pair of steel aviators. If it’s cold, she’ll throw on a black leather biker jacket.Weapons - Krystina carries a small machine pistol for personal defense, in case things get hairy, and man is she proud of it.The Medium Ranged Automatic Machine Pistol, known colloquially as the Miramap, is a fully automatic machine pistol carrying twenty rounds per magazine. Effective up to medium ranged engagements, the Miramap is a trusty sidearm that has pulled Krystina out of countless combat situations.Krystina also wields a standard-issue combat knife. For when things need to get a little old school.Equipment - Subdermal communications implant, capable of being tuned via Krystina’s pad on her wrist, the pad on her wrist which serves as a sort of small computer, and an emergency beacon. Just in case.Skills - Considered one of the most talented fighter pilots of her generation, anyone that has seen Krystina fly likens it to watching an Olympic figure skater. Her talent in the cockpit is unmatched. She also maintains peak physical condition. Trained in hand-to-hand combat, Krystina is both lethal in a fighter and in close quarters.Weaknesses - She lacks firearms training beyond basic training, and often lets her cockiness get the best of her. Overconfidence is often her downfall, sometimes forcing others to keep her in check just so she stays alive.Powers - nahLikes - Flying, physical fitness, people that know what they’re doing, and an ice cold beer with a pack of cigarettes when she has a moment to relax. Dislikes - Laziness, people that don’t know what they’re doing, and people with a moral compass that does not align with hers. She’s stubborn that way.Fears - Drowning and facing ultimatums. The only two things that are guaranteed to break her resolve.Personality - Incredibly confident in every way, Krystina can come off as brash and abrasive at first. However, the longer one gets accustomed to her cockiness, the friendlier and more lighthearted it seems. She cares intensely for her colleagues and more so for her friends, though it’s hard to tell behind how much she seems to care about only herself. Biography - Born during the Moscow winter, Krystina’s father believed from the very start that she would be made of steel. He was soon proven correct, as Krystina solidified herself as the toughest kid in the neighborhood by age 13. She regularly got into fights with other kids, and she almost always won. She was sent to boarding school in an effort to reel in her misbehavior, but she only continued to be a firecracker until she turned 18.Through all her fights and misconduct, Krystina dreamed of space. She always wanted to fly, and took every chance she could to watch the ships enter and exit the local spaceport. Nothing pleased her more than the sounds of the engines firing up and the rapid displacement of air as starships shot away.So, she joined the E.S.C. military. Trained to be a fighter pilot and was best in her class. She got her first starfighter at 24, and was stationed on the S.S. Cairo as the leader of the ship’s fighter squad. She saw most of her action fighting pirates and squashing small rebellions, and her reputation quickly grew as one of the best fighter pilots around. When the Durendal was put into service, Krystina was assigned as the ace fighter pilot and leader of the fighter squadron of the ship.


Accepted, nice character.
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Sorry not been feeling well recently but here is my character. Bit of a WIP but just wanted to get something up.

Character name - Virgo Freelander
Nickname - Vi
Position - Helmsman
Species - Human
Gender - Female
Age - 25
Appearance - http://th03.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2014/136/1/b/sci_fi_girl_by_fonteart-d7il8tr.jpg
Height - 5'2
Weight - 120 pounds
Apparel -
On duty; http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2013/234/f/6/rebel_by_thomaswievegg-d6j84e4.jpg
Off duty; jeans, shirt and leather jacket with boots.
Weapons -
+The magna sniper mark 6:
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This rifle is a long range weapon designed with a ten round magazine. The rifle is supposed to take out heavily armoured vehicles. Has a range of several miles and has an in built scope. The weapon is employed by many forces in rough terrain where less mobile heavy weapons can't reach.
+Mauser M2150:
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A truly brilliant design which has been proven to be highly reliable. Though much larger than its rivals it is around the same weight by using extremely light material however this makes the weapon quiet expensive. The pistol has a front loading magazine which means the magazine is not crammed into grip giving the weapon a much larger capacity than its competitors of 20 rounds.
+Combat knife.
+Fragmentation grenades.
Equipment - Emergency survival kit, radio and HUD helmet (in on duty image).
Skills - Highly skilled pilot with basic ground combat and survival training. Able to do minor repair work on spaceship parts and systems.
Weaknesses - Fear of water and can't swim.
Powers - Has no powers just an ordinary human.
Likes - Flying, guns, music, sports, reading and writing.
Dislikes - Water and anything related to it, bitter food and doing nothing.
Fears - Water since she can't swim.
Personality - Virgo is the type of person that speaks their mind which can make her seem rude but she sees it as being honest. She is a kind and caring person and always tries to help people when she can. Never one to stay still Virgo always needs something to occupy her mind.
Biography - Virgo comes from the dwarf planet Ceres in the asteroid belt. It is the biggest mining colony in the asteroid belt and has the highest population. Her farther was captain of a light cruiser assigned to the outer colonies and her mother ran the space port on the planet. Growing up Virgo never saw much of her farther and her mother was always busy with work. She always loved when her farther would come home because he always had a gift for her. Virgo grew up like any child would she went to school and came home.

As she grew older she became more interested in the world around her. This however landed her in a lot of trouble because she usually wonder of where she shouldn't go. Such as the loading docks that refuelled ships from all over the solar system to low gravity areas. The only thing she noticed more as she got older was the absence of her farther. On Virgo's tenth birthday her mother finally told her that her farther was on a long term deployment to the front line. During the final days of war they received news that Virgo's farther had been killed in action. It was truly devastating news for the family and it was a while before things even started to return to normal.

At age eighteen her mother gave her recording her farther had made for her before he left for war. He explained his reasons for going of and leaving her and her mother. It was quiet heart warming hearing his voice again but it was also moving when he said sorry. It gave her new found purpose and the next day she signed up to the military for training. Her test results showed she was most suited to be a pilot and so she was shipped out to the nearest training centre which was on Mars. She spent four years to graduate and be assigned a ship.

Virgo's first and only assignment to date was on an old frigate Hathaway. The ships main task was escort for civilian convoys. During this time she visited many alien worlds and even skirting around Rahq space. Virgo did this for three years and was considered still an expert helmsman using some unconventional manoeuvres. Recently her skills have been noticed and she was ordered to report back to Earth for reassignment to the S.S. Durendal.
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Sorry not been feeling well recently but here is my character. Bit of a WIP but just wanted to get something up.Character name - Virgo Freelander Nickname - ViPosition - Helmsman Species - HumanGender - FemaleAge - 25Appearance - http://th03.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2014/136/1/b/sci_fi_girl_by_fonteart-d7il8tr.jpgHeight - 5'2Weight - 120 poundsApparel - On duty; http://th06.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2013/234/f/6/rebel_by_thomaswievegg-d6j84e4.jpgOff duty; jeans, shirt and leather jacket with boots.Weapons - +The magna sniper mark 6:http://th08.deviantart.net/fs26/PRE/f/2008/170/0/7/Prototype_Rifle_by_nahiyankhan.jpgThis rifle is a long range weapon designed with a ten round magazine. The rifle is supposed to take out heavily armoured vehicles. Has a range of several miles and has an in built scope. The weapon is employed by many forces in rough terrain where less mobile heavy weapons can't reach. +Mauser M2150:http://th09.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2013/070/1/f/sci_fi_pistol_by_hayden_zammit-d5xoa16.jpgA truly brilliant design which has been proven to be highly reliable. Though much larger than its rivals it is around the same weight by using extremely light material however this makes the weapon quiet expensive. The pistol has a front loading magazine which means the magazine is not crammed into grip giving the weapon a much larger capacity than its competitors of 20 rounds.+Combat knife.+Fragmentation grenades.Equipment - Emergency survival kit, radio and HUD helmet (in on duty image).Skills - Highly skilled pilot with basic ground combat and survival training. Able to do minor repair work on spaceship parts and systems.Weaknesses - Fear of water and can't swim.Powers - Has no powers just an ordinary human.Likes - Flying, guns, music, sports, reading and writing.Dislikes - Water and anything related to it, bitter food and doing nothing.Fears - Water since she can't swim.Personality - Virgo is the type of person that speaks their mind which can make her seem rude but she sees it as being honest. She is a kind and caring person and always tries to help people when she can.Biography - Virgo comes from the dwarf planet Ceres in the asteroid belt. It is the biggest mining colony in the asteroid belt and has the highest population. Her farther was captain of a light cruiser assigned to the outer colonies and her mother ran the space port on the planet. Growing up Virgo never saw much of her farther and her mother was always busy with work. She always loved when her farther would come home because he always had a gift for her. Virgo grew up like any child would she went to school and came home.As she grew older she became more interested in the world around her. This however landed her in a lot of trouble because she usually wonder of where she shouldn't go. Such as the loading docks that refuelled ships from all over the solar system to low gravity areas. The only thing she noticed more as she got older was the absence of her farther. On Virgo's tenth birthday her mother finally told her that her farther was on a long term deployment to the front line. During the final days of war they received news that Virgo's farther had been killed in action. It was truly devastating news for the family and it was a while before things even started to return to normal.At age eighteen her mother gave her recording her farther had made for her before he left for war. He explained his reasons for going of and leaving her and her mother. It was quiet heart warming hearing his voice again but it was also moving when he said sorry. It gave her new found purpose and the next day she signed up to the military for training. Her test results showed she was most suited to be a pilot and so she was shipped out to the nearest training centre which was on Mars. She spent four years to graduate and be assigned a ship.Virgo's first and only assignment to date was on an old frigate Hathaway. The ships main task was escort for civilian convoys. During this time she visited many alien worlds and even skirting around Rahq space. Virgo did this for three years and was considered still an expert helmsman using some unconventional manoeuvres. Recently her skills have been noticed and she was ordered to report back to Earth for reassignment to the S.S. Durendal.


It looks good. I hope you feel better.

I'll have the IC up in a bit.
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All right good luck.
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So it's ok can I post in IC
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So it's ok can I post in IC


Yep. Your character is accepted.
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Accepted, a ton of detail.
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A note about the biography - the reason that I have it down as classified information is due to the logical probability of such an event occurring. Agents such as Aera Cura and Vampir are not supposed to be known about - we don't want any old Tom, Dick and Harry knowing all there is to know about them, do we? However, if a biography is absolutely necessary, I will of course edit one in.
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