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Hello all this is a work in progress that before I go to post I'd like a peer review of
Please ask questions or point out flaws or offer improvements






"TOYS IN THE ATTIC"


[B]Siren Robotics was primarily a manufacturer of pleasure model androids till one of their developers invented the Triplex CPU system creating a droid which was suddenly able to blend three personality matrixs into a single adaptive one. This allowed the Delta type to be autonomous from inception and activation.
Designed to be the perfect companion system Delta's three brains each handle a different aspect of environmental interaction.
The brains are coded Logic ( left breast), Emotional ( right breast) and Spurious Logic (center of the chest behind sternum)
Spurious Logic is where the Primary personality is located and where the results of the secondary brains information is filtered through a Spurious Logic buffer to create the personality presented to the world.

This series was so popular on their release that Siren Robotics had to license out production to other companies to keep up with the orders. Soon Deltas were performing jobs in almost every field of endeavor in which mankind was engaged.
The trouble began when some saw them as a threat so they began enacting laws limiting the use of Deltas and eventually outlawed the production of the Triplex CPU system for all but military use.
This series of laws was passed 300 years ago and all those Delta produced fell into disrepair for lack of parts. In some places the Delta's still exist in civilian hands but are owned by wealthy collectors due to the expense of their upkeep.

There are still human form androids throughout the human common wealth but any who know of the Delta's know these new type are but shadows, dummies an simpletons when compared to the Triplex CPU system Deltas

The Military, Social Services an Xeno-Diplomatic corps now controls the Triplex CPU system and it is found in more than androids, it is found as piloting systems in fighters to freighters. Tactical think tanks made up of 9 Triplex CPU systems form the backbone of battle field information analyst systems and are also used in social an diplomatic services.
It is the use of Think tanks that is the reason man can compete with the newly discovered Confederation.

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Confederation of Races

The Confed is a large governing body made up of hundreds of Races but is primarily run by three races listed below.
Set up like earth's UN but with greater power the Confed keeps the many races from being constantly at one another's throats or committing genocide
We discovered them or they discovered us about 50 years ago as we began colonies in a star system known as the Hessian system which is about 30 parsec from earth and earth's 10th colony
At first the discovery that we were not alone as expected was jarring to the human race as a whole. The military at first handled all contact with the overview of the Social services corps till it was decided by the combined military an social think tanks that earth needed a xeno-diplomatic service.
The XD as they are called in official circles has their own dedicated think tanks and personnel; they are responsible for all negotiations with the Confed.

The Confed it was found was having trouble with another group of extra galactic origins which it simply called Them who raided in what appeared to be a random manner. It was quickly revealed by the combined efforts of the Military, Social an Diplomatic think tanks that the raids were not random and were in fact predictable.
These think tanks predicted that the next raid would happen in a human controlled system. The Confed feeling at that time superior to the Humans choose to ignore the prediction leaving the Earther's meager military forces as the only defense against the next attack.
Using battle plans drawn up by the Military think tanks the Earth forces waited ready till the raider forces appeared in the predicted system, in the predicted time and with the predicted force strength.
Even with such information at it's disposal the Earth forces still had to fight a desperate battle which would have been lost were the think tanks not there to supply the winning tactics.
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Confed races

B'larch - a race that appears human in many ways except for natural skin an hair colors which range from bright green to blue skin and bright neon colored hair.
They are tall an slender standing a uniform 6 foot 4 inches on maturity with little variation. The B'larch are the highest tech race of the Confed and seem to also be interested in humanity on honest curiosity tainted by the White Man's burden

Sanva - a reptilian race of large size (Some are 16 foot tall) that are vegetarian an herd orientated and the longest lived of the Confed. Some earthers say they resemble Iguanas standing upright. The Sanva are the most benign of the Confed races but have the most powerful military.

Quint - a race of Hairless albino monkeys with prehensile tails
The Quint are a tricky race enjoying putting anyone they may at a disadvantage to themselves. It is this trait that makes them hate the think tanks because of their ability to see through the Quint plans

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The Confed ships and tech is beyond anything the humans have in all areas except robotics and it is the Triplex CPU system that is so far beyond them that the Confed has offered to trade any tech humanity wants if we'll just design a Triplex CPU system for their use.

Few outside of the military know that the Confed have tried to duplicate the Triplex CPU system only to find that it is designed to serve only humanity and understand our needs
Some believe this is due to the key root of the Triplex CPU system's Asimov laws on which all other functions are built but it is only speculation.

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Okay now to the meat of this ramble

Your Character is the member of a Work Program group which is Civic Service and mandatory for a citizens between the ages of 16 and 24. Each year you are gathered into a work gang and do a civil reclamation project. (Community service without crime)
You all come from various spectrum of the lower to middle class.
You are all watched by a very simple program that makes sure you all stay within a certain area and a civil officer checks your work twice a day (Morning and Night)
Most people do their service with no complaint but they are the Sheeple who wouldn't complain if their rations tasted like paste. Your group is made up of young people who chaff at the controlled manner in which their lives have been decided for them and want for more.
Labeled Non-conformist your gang is given what's seen as dirty grunt work tearing down an old ski complex that's been abandoned for over 100 years now.
You don't actually get your hands dirty often unless one of the Dummy bots get's stuck or breaks serving mostly as operators and overseers of the equipment.
You are dropped off in the Rocky Mountains over 200 miles from any semblance of civilization which most people of your age would view as being exiled.

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Okay enough rambling on that now to the creation part

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Name
Age
Occupation (Student, Collage, Technician, Office drone, Equipment operator, Programmer, Service Industries drone, Factory Worker......ect)
Biography ( at least two Paragraphs I wanna know where you're coming from)

Okay that's simple enough if you want to add more feel free but no subtractions (me I'm adding a Picture but you don't have to)
As for goodies you might have it was all given to you when they took your stuff

Each Gang Member is Equipped with
1-Wrist Computer/Communicator an Medical Monitor
3-Work coveralls Yellow
7- sets of undergarments Male/Female
2-pair protective eye ware
1- Hard Hat
4- pair work gloves
2- pair work boots
7-Pair of socks
1-Sleeping bag

The gang will be supplied food (edible not tasty) Shelter Co-ed (Sorry privacy is at a premium) Toilet articles and 1 Entertainment deck (Think cruddy old movies and TV and an old school Play station
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Hmm....guess I posted too late last night
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Once more
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I'm interested. I'm just reading over everything you have listed.
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Thanks for the Interest but as I said this is a work in progress
Do you see any holes or have any questions about what this RP is about?
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No questions yet. If I do though I'll let you know.
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I'll let you know by PM link if this becomes an RP
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Hmmm........ I suppose one more night can't hurt
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Well I tried
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Knowing that the creator of this RP is a wonderful writer, I could be very interested.
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Thanks Zmerr
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Wow Two people that don't think this is drek
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Well I'd love to find at least one more to play but unless I offer Pokemon as a Character class that doesn't seem likely to happen
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