[quote=Shifter_Master]
Well I always love it when I just start typing and when I look at the clock nest it has been two hours. Let me know what you think, opinions, thoughts, comments, issues I'm open to them all
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Ooh, this seems nice, but one problem I have is on how you're going to develop his character further, however I'll leave that to you. Another problem is his age; 16 is too young considering the level of proficiency you've placed him in. 18 or above would suite better, otherwise, you'll have to make him a bit less knowledgeable than now.