[quote=Jig]
I kinda feel like it's a bit clunky and unwieldy and dependent on feedback as to whether its appropriate and what its role is in relation to other submissions, and I'd rather sort that stuff out before submitting it. I was under the impression that anybody could edit it once submitted, but there's still a bit of dissection and stuff to be done yet.
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I was trying to figure out what I could input on, but you pretty much annotated everything I thought might come up. 

Ha, maybe adding how to be cool as the Fonz. That's important in roleplaying on the Guild.