@Goldeagle: I'm sorry, but the huge lack of information in the personality field of his bio makes it kind of difficult to figure out how he'd really act.

@Zombehs: There are a couple thing I noticed, firstly that you say he was discovered and a young age as if it's unusual. It's more unusual for a Dragonslayer not to be recognized at a young age, really. ^^;

@Winter: Looks good, accepted.

@Luminance: She looks mostly okay, but I'm going to take a bit longer to get my final verdict up.