[quote=Lucius Cypher]
Hey Windel I finished up my two CS's ! Not sure if it's right since the other player's CS's are incomplete, but there it is.
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Congratulations Lucius. You get to be the first accepted RPer of Deep Ground Online. Just some nitpicks though; Donny would have automatically received Deep Ground at age 13, as all children do. The same goes for Retsu. No one has a choice of whether they want Deep Ground or not. Finally, Retsu has one too many abilities at the get go, so please remove four and she's good. Donny is fine.

[quote=Spoo]
Argharng.I'm dropping out. This CS is driving me bonkers and I haven't the slightest idea why. I just can't feel satisfied with it.
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Well, it is a shame to see you to so soon. Good luck to you.