I've been itching for a Sci fi RP ever since the last one I was in died. I saw that this was still accepting so I figured why not now? Tell me I need to edit anything.

Full Name: Raymond "Ray" Bellard
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Branch of Service: FSA "Landers" 
Rank: (E-8) Master Sergeant
Military Occupational Specialty: Scout Sniper
Appearance: 
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He stands 6 feet tall, his eyes a striking green, his dark hair buzzed to the standard military cut. [/hider]

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A standard sniper rifle among the Marines, the Viper fires bullets at a ferocious velocity which can easily take down targets with shots to critical areas of the body. It is semi automatic with a twelve round magazine. Comes equipped with a bipod and a variable zoom on the scope.

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A common pistol among the armed forces, the Deacon is a trusty a sturdy semi automatic handgun with a fifteen round magazine. 

[url=http://216.38.63.83/images/products/2988-1.jpg]Combat knife[/url]
A simple combat knife, still effective in hand to hand combat and when stabbed into the vital parts of a human body.
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Personality: Ray is a quiet soldier, it comes with the job which usually sees him having to stay near silent on the field while he either scouts ahead, snipes or does both. He's friendly with his fellow crewmen, cracking jokes to lighten up the mood on occasion. He puts the well being of the crew and the mission ahead of everything else, doing what is needed to get the job done. He's great at planning tactics before a battle and prefers to work with a smaller group.

Biography: Ray's childhood was nothing out of the ordinary, he was raised by a single mother, his father never in his life except the very early stages. He graduated high school as a solid B student, unsure of where to go next in life. So he worked construction for two years, it was hard, but honest work, he hated it and enlisted shortly after quitting at the age of 20. He eventually made his way as a scout sniper, distinguishing himself as a trusty soldier able to hit whatever target he was asked and willing to do whatever was needed win the battle that day.

He has spent every year since then in the Marines, reaching the rank of Master Sargent, seeing many battles all over, having no problem with serving wherever they needed him. He jumped at the opportunity to join the crew of The Vigilance, inspired to see the stars which interested him from a young age.