Darkwolf, is there anyway you could be a little more specific on Orthac's ability? "His breath can take and give life, and slaves those he raises to his will" Does this mean he can just kill or raise people from the dead? I'm especially curious about the killing at will part. Are there any specific stipulations on that? How does it work? How long does it take to kill someone? If it's too instant or if it applies to anyone/anything, I might ask you to tone it down a bit. That's like a one hit battle-winner. Cool, but maybe a bit much. Sorry it took so long to respond. I saw this earlier and just had to sit on it for a little while. However, Karthac is fine. No changes needed for her.