I always thought the point of the whole leaf thing was to highlight her dissatisfaction with her normalcy. Like, she's tired of being "that girl". So personally, I would be focusing on trying to develop her into a character that struggles to become special and matures as she goes along.

She's immature, petulant, rude, self-centered and weak. Most of all, Lovedaia is [i]normal[/i]. She has no great powers, no terrifying past, no prophetic destiny that hinges upon her interaction, and this dissatisfies her, it's one of the reasons she's such a petulant child of a girl. She's unremarkable, and what she needs to learn most is that [i]it's okay to be unremarkable[/i], she needs to mature and develop into the Badass Normal that she could develop into.

And the first step on the road to being a badass is admitting that she's truly incompetent. It's not as hard to write as it might seem, and Lovedaia can turn out to be the character everyone relates to, everyone sympathizes with, and everyone cheers for the most.

Either way, that's how I felt about Lovedaia, and it's a question that I think you should ask yourself. That question being, "Lufu is normal in a sea of abnormal, is she okay with that?" Perhaps you can then also ask if her personality and disposition are how they are because she wishes to outwardly show her dissatisfaction with herself and jealousy of others by attempting to be unique while at the same time just being... rude.

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[quote=Jedly (Posted 3 days ago)]
Yeah, my post'll be up tonight. I don't seem to have that much HW. Mah lawd, that's a bit of OOC chatter. I'll have to read it during my free, and catch up on the IC. Also gotta finish the book for school, "The Sun Also Rises"... 
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; A ; Jedlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.

I don't normally like to rush people, but pleaaaase. I feel starved from not having anything to write!