I see no problem with the bio, but I see some problems with the skills, it seems that your forgot to check which are the skills in Daggerfall. There is no such thing as Speech (being divided between etiquette for talking with nobles and streetwise for talking with peasants) and alchemy (which can only be done by paying NPCs) and monks are not supposed to be able to wear steel gauntlets (if it is to hit harder with hand to hand combat do not worry, you won't need it being a monk) but this last thing is not very important and I can allow it Contrary to what you would think, monks are not a magician class, they are warriors, but considering that I don't want to abide 100% by the rules I'm not going to prohibit it from doing magic (just so that you know that it shouldn't), but the problem is that you didn't put which spells you would use, "some restoration magic for warding off daedra and other spirits" is not specific and, as Grey has said, the restoration school has no such kind of warding magic in Daggerfall The back story and characterization is really good and I want to see it in action, but I recommend that you put the skills in order by putting 3 primary skills and 3 secondary skills from Daggerfall and also specify the spells (in the case of a monk, a maximum of two weak spells at the beginning)