[quote=Partisan]
The name, maybe? Aevar sounds Nordic enough, Drahvar sounds like you ripped it from an Elder Scrolls dark elf. :P His history seems a bit cliché (father that made him hate him, then fought and killed him) but I'm not really against that, I'm just saying it's been done before, many many times. I'll wait for you to say if you wanna change it, I mean it's acceptable but I think you can do better as this wasn't about writing skills but just imagination.
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Yes, I thought the last name didn't fit quite right.. XD. I actually have something much better planned for a backstory that I think you'll like, so I will edit my post whenever I get the chance.