[quote=Sundered Echo]
A wild CS appeared!From my brief skimming, I have only one thing to point out. A common mistake on human characters - humans have only been in the galactic community for a short time, I forget the exact number of years, but right now I believe its a little over twenty years since the first contact war. Which means at age 46, it would be impossible for him to have been at the citadel while young.
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Absolutely right. I made some edits to cut out the Citadel piece and made things more time appropriate. Apologies for that amateur mistake!