[quote=Bridgeburner]
Sorry guys - have been busy lately.Khan, is my NS looking alright so far?I want to finish up and vote muahahahahaha
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Just a few things. 

First, Darkbreaker, you said it was made by Arne Jaegar, I assume that means it is not a Kammeth forged makitherin steel sword? 

It also seems ppl keep mixing up racial traits with culture, which might be due to how it was written in the description, racial traits are more like passive special abilities for each race. 

Anyway, aside from the sword, I don't see any glaring issues.