[quote=Dysprosium]
(Not gonna quote the whole entire CS)
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Nice CS. *Dat black butler appearance doe*
Edit:
Actually, quick note. His year of birth be 2050, as the current year is 2066.
[quote=eddieddi]
...still waiting on Gray, or another Co-Gm to respond to my response in the CS debate.
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[quote=Cynder]
I'm not looking CSes right now. I was leaving Grey to deal with your CS, if need be, I'll look over it. You have fair point for most of the debate, but I'm not a mind reader and neither are my Staff members. We can't assume those details unless you explain it -- that being said, I'm willing to accept your points in regards to your character's origin, assault rifle and so on. However, I still feel like your CS is a little overpowered in terms of weapons and power suit, that sort of thing.Also, you and Arowne have close to identical CSes, both of you having the same name/nickname and similiar weapon/fighting style, however, I'd have to choose yours over him/her, since you posted first.Details are being worked out, please be patient. Thank you.
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Alright, just read over your CS quite a bit. Now, do keep in mind your character is a student, though it may be of an academy which specializes in training combatants, they aren't armed to the teeth. If you were to give us a little insight; perhaps on how Leonardo has access to an abundance of [i]mana crystals[/i], since I'm sure a plethora is required to power both the scythe/axe/rifle and the suit of armor. As for the hand-held weapon, only quams I have with it is the [i]Mana Bomb[/i] ability. I like the idea of it, but not on such a grand scale. Perhaps something less powerful and more controlled, but has the same effects pertaining to the durability of its power source. As for the suit of armor; either than housing the equivalent to a militia, there are a few things that shouldn't be present. I'd tone it down a bit, taking out the 'dozens' of weapons. Maybe narrow it down to only the mana cannons and the chakra disruptor. The flame-thrower and shotgun are a tad bit overkill. Just tell us a bit more about his mentors, and his suppliers.

On another note. I'll have my CS in the character bin soon.