[b]Hank:[/b] Firmly within acceptable limits, but it doesn't blow me away with excellence. ;P
 
[b]Rayn Night:[/b] Sure, but a new king wouldn't really have any motivation to kill them, either.

[b]Nemasaire:[/b] Yep, that's basically what I was hoping you'd write. Paste that into your personality section and you won't go far wrong. Just don't forget to describe your species somewhere.

For the record, I'm not particularly a fan of realism in fantasy. I just want the setting to be consistent and all my players to know what they want out of playing. That's something I never get in pen and paper. ///_.

[b]Flagg:[/b] Love the concept, but that's a very short sheet. 

[b]Lexicon:[/b] Please shrink your image.