[quote=Jedly]
Well... Alright, I'm just going to say that at the moment; this CS is rejected. Due to the fact you've only written a line for the bio... and only a word for the personality. But, we would gladly help you expand on what you've written so far. As long as you can jam out at least a couple of paragraphs per post, and can elaborate enough in your CS, you'll be welcomed into the RP.
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I was told by the OP to keep both of those things you mentioned "Brief or even vague" for the sake of fleshing out in the rp. I don't understand how the Bio and Personality i provided would be unacceptable.