It's better, but there are still some things that I mention in my prior post about the character that haven't been addressed. I would also recommend increasing the size of the wingspan to something around twelve feet, since a three foot wingspan wouldn't be even remotely large enough to carry a 5'9" man weighing 125 pounds aloft. That's only 1'6" per wing. Generally, a good rule of thumb for winged characters is to make the wingspan 2x greater than the character's height, though you can shorten or lengthen that a bit if you prefer more maneuverability or more endurance respectively.

I hate to be "that guy", and I apologize in advance if this makes me sound like a jerk because I honestly don't mean it that way, but there are a lot of grammatical errors in that CS that make it very difficult to read. Normally I try not to make an issue out of it, but in this case good grammar is pretty necessary in order for us to obtain a decent grasp of the character and his abilities. If you could try and clean it up (maybe read it aloud to help work out better phrasing and punctuation), I'd be really appreciative.

All that said, don't let this discourage you from participating. I know how frustrating it can be to have to go back to a CS after you've already written and altered it once, but once the kinks get worked out you'll have a much cooler character than you did originally (I'm speaking from experience on that). :)