I have no complaints about the race, though I am a little curious - maybe I'm just misinterpreting the whole thing, but they seem so close to human to me (as in, written to be similar to humans - what I have a problem with are people making sentient four-dimensional gas clouds that feed on peg legs and geometry, then playing them as humans) that they could just be a different culture. Did the rubber forehead rule make you hesitate to differentiate them more from humans?

On a side note, I'm gonna start moving sheets over to the OOC thread. I'll move them all at the same time, so if you see your (completed - not moving WIPs) sheet missing later, make sure to mention it. Or post it again, whatever's most convenient.