[quote=Bweoti]
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There's only really two thing, and that is his levitation magic-thingie. Magic in your human forms aren't very powerful, if you have any at all. He would be strong as a human, yes, but he'll be stronger in his Giant form. 

So this levitation-like magic would only really be powerful in his Titan form, allowing him to lift several tons. Also, for a Giant Titan, I feel like 25 feet is a little small. Perhaps 30 feet? That would put his height at a few metres above a typical (shifter) dragon's shoulder. 
The second thing is really just a small mistake, and that's the fact that The Academy is a 3-year course, not 5 years. You start on the third year :) 

[quote=LittleMist]
: Asae Asumi: Female: 18: Dragon: :: : : : ::
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There is... quite a lot of stuff with this character. First is her powers: She doesn't have any, nor does her parents. It was made perfectly clear in the first post where I wrote all the info that normal humans don't have any magical powers of any kind. Furthermore, even after she becomes a Shifter she won't have that kind of magic. Dragons (and generally Titans) have very little active magic, as they focus on brute strength, being incredibly durable and so on. A Fire Breath or something like that is the most a standard Dragon would have. 

The second thing, I feel, is the biggest. It's basically her entire personality coupled with background. I get the feeling that she's a rather friendly person, but still utterly insane and unstable. No one would let someone mentally unstable like that join the army, let alone make them powerful enough to destroy an entire town singlehandedly. That's not to mention that Social services would have inteferred if she really did live under borderline torture and opression, mental and physical. I'm afraid that you character, as she is, would not be allowed to become a Shifter. She's just far too unstable. 

I'll have to ask you to rework her personality and background to something a bit more realistic--as well as remove the 'Powers' she and her parents have. And try not to make it one where her parents pressure her as we already have that, and having all characters be pretty much identical doesn't make for a very interesting RP.