[quote=Ichthys] @Milieu: Atlas seems much better adjusted now; I formally accept the character. I'm glad the discussion idea worked out! :D [/quote] Awesome :) I have some concerns regarding Castor's character as well. First off, he bears the last name of the D'Cerf? Is this just an adoptive name applied to those without a surname? (For instance, would Atlas be Atlas D'Cerf simply because he doesn't have an original surname?) Or is this the name of the High Priestess, and she passed it on, if so, wouldn't that mean succession would pass to Castor's character? Originally, I thought D'Cerf was simply a sorta clan name, applicable to anyone apart of it, like how American, is typically used to describe a person from the United States. I might just be nitpicking, but I figured with all the detail put in to make things more succinct that it might pose an issue. Idunno though. And the ability is kinda confusing too. Does the glyph making requires using fancy materials to boost the power of a spell? If so, why these particular materials? You mentioned, gold, silver, diamonds, bedazzlement- are these valued for magical channeling properties versus the toilet paper? You also seem to use "rune" and glyph interchangeably, which are kinda synonymous, yet I think glyph suits your purpose for the elemental magic your character would be utilizing. What's the process to utilize it? Does he have an activation phrase? If so, is there a cool down on the spell? Or is the energy embedded in the glyph, via preparation ritual, and it has a one time use?