Okay, first of all. You mention a motorcycle in his dexterity, however you don't mention it again. Where is the info on the motorcyle? Second, his abilities are passable yeah. I can accept those as they are. Third, how much ammunition does he carry around for the gunblade? Fourth, how hot does that fire stone burn? You mention it can burn through 'wood', however, there's a shit ton of 'wood' out there. So what kind of reference are you giving us? How about you use celsius or fahrenheit insted of an abstract definition? Fifth, give me a wind speed on that wind stone. That's important.