[b]@Sillygoy[/b] I'm very sorry but as being both one of the GMs and the one who's currently in charge of The Holy Order of Idris, I have to give you some major points of critique; 1. The Order of Idris is currently close to omnipotence in Othea, seeing how they control the current king as though he was a puppet and they are currently expanding even further. It would be possible for a really small group of dissidents to have recently formed, but not a group who has been around for more than 50 years and gained as much influence as you describe them to have. Seeing their current power and the nature of their organization, The Holy Order would have stomped out any dissidents long ago, as soon as they appear to form a threat or disobey the Holy Order. 2. Moreover, we're really trying to make this into a fantasy world. The Holy Order is not a Christian organization whatsoever, despite their practices that might at first seem similar to the Medieval Church. Due to this, they have no church, no cross as a holy symbol (this especially would make no sense at all, seeing how the cross didn't play a role in the history of the Holy Order, unless we say that Idris the Messenger was crucified... which I'd like to avoid really xD) no nuns (seeing how women are just cattle in their eyes), and no bishops. They have inquisitors, preachers and a Holy Council (who pull the king's strings). How exactly the Order works hasn't been decided, but I really want to steer away from Christianity, or any other major religions on earth for that matter. I can understand that you want the Order of Light to be different from the Holy Order, which is a good thing in itself, but please do understand that it won't be able to flourish as long as The Holy Order of Idris holds the power in Othea. 3. A minor point, at one part you state that he only had the relic for half a year and then you say it has been two weeks. It would be nice to have just one of them for the sake of clarity ^_^ To me, those are the main points of concern, excuses for being so harsh (Idris is turning into my little baby lol) :') I'm sure Ellri and Bark will come up with other comments on Dogfael, though I must say that I like the general concept of a hedonist priest. --------- [b]@Freeshooter[/b] I took a look at it and I personally think that he's accepted. If my fellow GMs agree with that, you can post him into the character thread. ---------- [b]@Maki[/b] Looking good, we do have to find something to connect Marcus and Kaiden this time around xD Two minor points, it would be nice if you fill in his age and if you think of a reason for Kaiden to be in Othea. Just stating that the band of bandits has moved its working territory to Othea and Kaiden is checking out the city is good enough for me (though knowing Ellri, I'm not sure if you'll get away with that lol), as long as you give a reason. --------- [b]@Sep[/b] While Ellri is the specialist concerning CS's, I'd like to give a two minor comments on Malich. 1. I think you'll need to edit the "Recently dubbed Lord Umbra" part out of your history ;p 2. Just out of curiosity, is there something powering his relic or does it only have to draw from the shadows?