Unfortunately, we have two Vampire characters, one Lycan character, and one undead character - so I've stopped any more of these for now. The possibility of vampirism can be played out further on in the roleplay, just ask me first.
Because of this, I'll need you to change all the vampire armour mentions, bio, vampirical skills, etc. I'd also like a metal less precious than Daedric for your dagger, and perhaps not glass arrows - they're not going to be in massive abundance, considering how intricate they are. Also, malachite is very rare in Skyrim, which is used to make the glass arrows, so perhaps something less - steel works just fine. An arrow's an arrow, after all. Just for the beginning, anyway.
Also, portable alchemy kits aren't particularly possible. The alembic itself is massive, and fragile. Not the best thing to be carrying around in warzones. If your alchemy skill is high, you can make potions and poisons that are potent enough that you don't have to use a lot, so carrying those around shouldn't be a problem. I mean, you can use alchemy tables at any alchemist shop, or other random locations.

Other than those small things - and sorry to crush yours hopes, it is a good sign-up, after all - please fix them and move it on over to the OOC.