[quote=Nevermind] Just going to go ahead and post, will edit in an app. [/quote] That excitement I felt when I clicked on that hider button, thinking I'd get to read the first CS, aaaaaaand... nope. You got my hopes up big time, Nevermind. No rush, though. Just have it done as soon as you can. The sooner the better. ASAP. Quickly. No pressure. [quote=Jazzy] Not quite done yet, but tell me what you think of these so far, especially if I need to make any edits before I finish the final sheet. [/quote] Even without Brick's CS, I think it's safe to say you're accepted. So unless he turns out to be the worst character in all of literary existence, you're good. I love Tony and Allie so far, although I really can't picture Allie in my head. I started off thinking of a rough country girl who likes to throw a few punches but is morally intelligent, but then she sort of became that one kid in high school who smokes in the bathroom and writes song lyrics on her self-torn jeans. I can't really picture Allie as much. Once I read more of her, I'll probably get a better understanding. Still, great characters so far. Just to clarify, Allie would be about 22-ish, correct? Welcome to Apocalyptica, Jazzy! If you want to go ahead and post in the IC now, you can. We're not all fully set up, but don't wait on us. I'll let you know once we're all ready. [quote=TheUnknowable] My two guys. I'll write them as a team, but if you want I'll only use one. [/quote] I haven't read them yet, but I will by the end of tonight and I'll have feedback.