[quote=AlidaMaria]
@Fallen, I don't see anything wrong with it! Interesting concept. Unless Bark has some objections, you can post away! (post it in the character thread, that is)
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Alright, once he weighs in I'll look for any grammar errors and correct them before putting it up. Some of ones I caught were rather worse than normal, though I was in a hurry to get it up ASAP.