[quote=Professor_Wyvern]
It introduces your character, explains some motivation on stuff he wants to do, and things like that. Yes, it is a successful intro. I'll intro the NPC Guards and such to respond. OH! Have you thought of any stuff you'd like to do Long Term with Ark'kruy'ek?
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What could he do? His race is hated by a lot of people. I'm not really sure what he could do that would be long term.